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This is my term 2 writing

1)Water going between the rocks  

2)Trees waving quietly in the wind   

3)Rocks standing still as the water pushes them

4) Plants silvering in the dark shadow

5) Sunlight shining on the water

6) Leaves being blown off by the wind

7) Branches snapping because of the wind

8) Bushes wiggling as the wind blows by

9)Vines hanging down from the trees

10) Stream moving smoothly

This is my Batman writing

In the dark city of gotham there lived a hero the guardian the dark night a hero that never  stops fighting for what's right.His name is Batman his identity is brucewayne he was a orphan his mum and dad were killed. By two face with two shots and died get it two shots he he he never mind so then he found a cave.But it became the bat cave and they

stated to make the bat suit the mask took 2 hours  to make because it is made out of cole .On his first mission he tried to get information from commissioner gordon and he got it but he did not wear his suit.